I hope Jack attack will comment on these! They're not part of a book but I wrote them for my band "the shaddowed"

It's a really really great song jewel! But why did you want me to comment it?

Sorry aghh that sounds mean I'm meant like why did you hope for me to comment on it?

I don't know, I guess because your a writer too? I don't know

And you don't sound mean 

Thanks :) but I'm not a real writter like you

Hehe your good enough to be! 